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	<title>Comments on: How To Become A Better Writer</title>
	<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/</link>
	<description>reb•e•lu•tion (reb’el lu shen) n. a teenage rebellion against the low expectations of an ungodly culture.</description>
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		<title>by: clonazepam</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-62434</link>
		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Apr 2007 14:43:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>by: Bentley</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2290</link>
		<pubDate>Wed, 31 Dec 1969 19:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>These are great, thank you guys!  :D  I especially appreciate points 3 through 5 by C. S. Lewis.  I think I tend to fluff my writing a little more than is necessary, especially my creative writing.  I have never realized how simply using a descriptive word to tell the reader how a scene &lt;i&gt;ought&lt;/i&gt; to feel really does weaken the effect of my writing...  I will bear these tips in mind in my future work!

~Heidi</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>These are great, thank you guys!  <img src='http://www.therebelution.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif' alt=':D' class='wp-smiley' />   I especially appreciate points 3 through 5 by C. S. Lewis.  I think I tend to fluff my writing a little more than is necessary, especially my creative writing.  I have never realized how simply using a descriptive word to tell the reader how a scene <i>ought</i> to feel really does weaken the effect of my writing&#8230;  I will bear these tips in mind in my future work!</p>
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		<title>by: David Boskovic</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2291</link>
		<pubDate>Wed, 31 Dec 1969 19:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Excellent! Really. Those are wonderful points to keep in mind. *looks at sentence* Ok, let me try harder this time -- like a rebelu... forget it. If the reader wants to know how I came to that conclusion they have to read up so they can say, &quot;These are amazing points.&quot;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent! Really. Those are wonderful points to keep in mind. *looks at sentence* Ok, let me try harder this time &#8212; like a rebelu&#8230; forget it. If the reader wants to know how I came to that conclusion they have to read up so they can say, &#8220;These are amazing points.&#8221;
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		<title>by: Nathan Straub</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2292</link>
		<pubDate>Wed, 31 Dec 1969 19:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>The past two days I have read chapters on composition in two major paralegal textbooks.  Both set as a standard _The Elements of Style_ by Will Strunk &amp; E.B. White, accessible at http://www.bartleby.com/141/.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The past two days I have read chapters on composition in two major paralegal textbooks.  Both set as a standard _The Elements of Style_ by Will Strunk &#038; E.B. White, accessible at <a href='http://www.bartleby.com/141/' rel='nofollow'>http://www.bartleby.com/141/</a>.
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		<title>by: Lindsey</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2293</link>
		<pubDate>Wed, 31 Dec 1969 19:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Thanks for posting these!</description>
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		<title>by: Kaitlin</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2294</link>
		<pubDate>Wed, 31 Dec 1969 19:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>These lists are awesome!  Thanks!</description>
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		<title>by: Hannah Beth</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2295</link>
		<pubDate>Wed, 31 Dec 1969 19:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>I can clearly see which areas of my writing need improvement. Thank you for sharing this helpful advice!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I can clearly see which areas of my writing need improvement. Thank you for sharing this helpful advice!
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		<title>by: Alyssa C.</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2296</link>
		<pubDate>Wed, 31 Dec 1969 19:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Thanks for the wonderful post!  Those are tips that I will try to keep in mind...especially when I start panicking because I feel like I have nothing to write due to &quot;writer's block&quot;. :P</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the wonderful post!  Those are tips that I will try to keep in mind&#8230;especially when I start panicking because I feel like I have nothing to write due to &#8220;writer&#8217;s block&#8221;. <img src='http://www.therebelution.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif' alt=':P' class='wp-smiley' />
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		<title>by: Hannah L.</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2297</link>
		<pubDate>Wed, 31 Dec 1969 19:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2297</guid>
					<description>Thanks for sharing this! I supppose I tend to get stuck in the descriptive word rut at times, instead of actually describing the scene. All good pointers! My favorite has to be &quot;Don't write until you have something to say.&quot; :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for sharing this! I supppose I tend to get stuck in the descriptive word rut at times, instead of actually describing the scene. All good pointers! My favorite has to be &#8220;Don&#8217;t write until you have something to say.&#8221; <img src='http://www.therebelution.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' />
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