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	<title>Comments on: How To Become A Better Writer</title>
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	<description>reb•e•lu•tion (reb’el lu shen) n. a teenage rebellion against low expectations</description>
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		<title>By: clonazepam</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-62434</link>
		<dc:creator>clonazepam</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Apr 2007 14:43:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>&lt;strong&gt;clonazepam...&lt;/strong&gt;

news...</description>
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<p>news&#8230;</p>
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		<title>By: Bentley</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2290</link>
		<dc:creator>Bentley</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>These are great, thank you guys!  :D  I especially appreciate points 3 through 5 by C. S. Lewis.  I think I tend to fluff my writing a little more than is necessary, especially my creative writing.  I have never realized how simply using a descriptive word to tell the reader how a scene &lt;i&gt;ought&lt;/i&gt; to feel really does weaken the effect of my writing...  I will bear these tips in mind in my future work!

~Heidi</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>These are great, thank you guys!  <img src='http://www.therebelution.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif' alt=':D' class='wp-smiley' />  I especially appreciate points 3 through 5 by C. S. Lewis.  I think I tend to fluff my writing a little more than is necessary, especially my creative writing.  I have never realized how simply using a descriptive word to tell the reader how a scene <i>ought</i> to feel really does weaken the effect of my writing&#8230;  I will bear these tips in mind in my future work!</p>
<p>~Heidi</p>
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		<title>By: David Boskovic</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2291</link>
		<dc:creator>David Boskovic</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Excellent! Really. Those are wonderful points to keep in mind. *looks at sentence* Ok, let me try harder this time -- like a rebelu... forget it. If the reader wants to know how I came to that conclusion they have to read up so they can say, "These are amazing points."</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Excellent! Really. Those are wonderful points to keep in mind. *looks at sentence* Ok, let me try harder this time &#8212; like a rebelu&#8230; forget it. If the reader wants to know how I came to that conclusion they have to read up so they can say, &#8220;These are amazing points.&#8221;</p>
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		<title>By: Nathan Straub</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2292</link>
		<dc:creator>Nathan Straub</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The past two days I have read chapters on composition in two major paralegal textbooks.  Both set as a standard _The Elements of Style_ by Will Strunk &amp; E.B. White, accessible at http://www.bartleby.com/141/.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The past two days I have read chapters on composition in two major paralegal textbooks.  Both set as a standard _The Elements of Style_ by Will Strunk &#038; E.B. White, accessible at <a href="http://www.bartleby.com/141/" rel="nofollow">http://www.bartleby.com/141/</a>.</p>
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		<title>By: Lindsey</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2293</link>
		<dc:creator>Lindsey</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for posting these!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for posting these!</p>
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		<title>By: Kaitlin</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2294</link>
		<dc:creator>Kaitlin</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>These lists are awesome!  Thanks!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>These lists are awesome!  Thanks!</p>
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		<title>By: Hannah Beth</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2295</link>
		<dc:creator>Hannah Beth</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I can clearly see which areas of my writing need improvement. Thank you for sharing this helpful advice!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I can clearly see which areas of my writing need improvement. Thank you for sharing this helpful advice!</p>
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		<title>By: Alyssa C.</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2296</link>
		<dc:creator>Alyssa C.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the wonderful post!  Those are tips that I will try to keep in mind...especially when I start panicking because I feel like I have nothing to write due to "writer's block". :P</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the wonderful post!  Those are tips that I will try to keep in mind&#8230;especially when I start panicking because I feel like I have nothing to write due to &#8220;writer&#8217;s block&#8221;. <img src='http://www.therebelution.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_razz.gif' alt=':P' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Hannah L.</title>
		<link>http://www.therebelution.com/blog/2006/07/how-to-become-a-better-writer/#comment-2297</link>
		<dc:creator>Hannah L.</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Nov 1999 00:00:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for sharing this! I supppose I tend to get stuck in the descriptive word rut at times, instead of actually describing the scene. All good pointers! My favorite has to be "Don't write until you have something to say." :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for sharing this! I supppose I tend to get stuck in the descriptive word rut at times, instead of actually describing the scene. All good pointers! My favorite has to be &#8220;Don&#8217;t write until you have something to say.&#8221; <img src='http://www.therebelution.com/blog/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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